I'm more a yaoi lover than soft boy's love fan but I'd read your story even if there'd be none of both components because I love your character style and the main story at all.

Well, I love your YAOI stuff but understand that you have tone it down to get published. I love CyberSteel and would defiantly read chapter 2. In truth, it is hard to understand what is going on in the first part because nothing is really explained. However, you made me fall in love with Kev and Alex in the first few pages. Plus, the quality is top notch (better then some published comics), so I am now your eternal fan.

Is it going to suit the characters?
Personally I liked it the way it is...

Weeeell, I actually like the idea of more softness and more plot, despite my love of yaoi
Much more plot development would be great, because it was a bit hard to understand in the beginning...but can there be some real yaoi sprinkled in there with the soft? Pretty please? *puppy dog eyes*
In any case, I can't wait to read it ;D